Double crossed

by Megha   Oct 7, 2004


So much anger i have never felt,
with so much pain i have never dealt.
i was quite amused i must say,
by how u fooled me day after day.

i don't know if i should laugh or cry,
what i cant understand is WHY??
i don't know if i can ever trust you now,
all i can think of is HOW??

you lied to me,to her,and to all people who care,
really,its too much for me to bear.
its amazing how you thought you'd get away,
do you think its so simple to betray??

i don't trust anyone now and i don't know if i ever will,
my trust in trust you've managed to kill.
what a well placed and well thought of plan,
if YOU can hurt me the way you did,ANYONE can.

no one has hurt me so much,never,
this wound is going to last forever.
you can now feel proud of what youve done,
my hatred and distrust you have won.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    and thank u other guys 4 ure comments it means a lot....i feel better reading ure comments...thanks again :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    hey trincy thanks 4 commenting...yes it is on a true experience...i got 2 timed by the guy hu i trusted more than ne1 else in the world! can u blv it?????????
    neways im okay..cant do nething bout it neway
    and yes i did notice the last two lines going too long but i just wrote what came to my mind...ill try editing it if i can....i appreciate ute honesty thanks :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ş∂ņďħy∂

    Sorry dear, I didn't notice that you were back.. This poem is wonderful. I can feel the emotions in it.. I am sorry if it is about true experience. Hope you are fine. IF you want to talk about it.. mail me.. anytime... Than this poem, you are important. So i hope you will take care of yourself.

    About the poem.. if you feel like editing it.. I would suggest you to look again at the last stanza... The word "last" looks a bit forced to rhyme. And the last 2 lines exceeded the length way beyound the other ones.. Only if you feel its needed..

    Take care,
    Love, Trincy.

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Welcome back,Megha....after such a long time ur writing a poem...this poem was very honest and touching i must say...Take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

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