It was prity good

OMG I LOVED IT WOWOWOWOWOW

Very touching. I just finished a short story on telling someone you love them; oddly enough the words I Love You are often spoken when it is to late.

Anyways, I liked this piece even though it is sad. I can honestly picture the bloody halls and the girl frantically crying out. Good work letting the images flow continuesly. (Please forgive the spelling).

Keep it up, and I hope that you reach your goal.

--Sher

This was good

Great.. :)

Great! Very touching.