WOW.. that is incredible.. i am speechless! this is a wonderful poem that shows so much emotion... keep up the AWESOME work!

jenn

a very touching poem....it really makes you think about the people who do love you. 5/5

Beautiful! Keep up the great work!

Good poem!!! Keep up the good work. :)

no! that's not fair... but i guess thats life.
i give it a 5!
~Angel Of The Flames~

so good and seems as if you are doing well on your votes and keep up the good work,

~Xiaoyu~

i luv it. even though its really sad but its good.

wow...amazing!

really good, 5, take care

That was so GOOD.I LOVED IT
great job.l

that was so good! And that was an amazing ending nice work definatly 5/5
xxxChristinaxxx

I like your poem but its not my favorite of yours

Nice work I hope u make ur goal Glad to help u!

Awesome poem..I read some of your other poems too..your really good. keep up the good work!
-J-

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omg. tears are actually welling up in my eyes. that was so sad, but so realistic at the same time. wow. awesome-ly written. definite 5 on that one

great pem 5/5 hope you reach your goal

wow interesting i love to read story poems but i never write any for some reason lol anyway i thought it was great a bit depressing but good anyways keep up the good work im givin u a 5/5, could u check out some of my poems? that'd be awsome
~Mollie

+1
Nicely done..
keep it up!
;)

this poem delivers a powerful message and is well written, it makes you think