wow, excellent poem!

Didn't know you had it in you! Damn, that was pretty dark. Looks like we're taking after each other lol
Keep it up
Aken Sol

Wow, amazing poem, it flowed so well and had such feeling to it, excellent! 5/5

I agree with all your other commenters
with one note you have a unquie writting
style.A style that makes you want to read more. like a movie that lives you wantting
more. 5/5