Feel

by Monica   Oct 10, 2004


Praying on the floor.
Sobbing for it to end,
But it wont.
You're to "young" they say.
After a few days it gets better,
But then, BAM!
It hits you like quick sand.
You struggle to stay up, alive,
But your too weak, and you give up.
It's over.....

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  • 21 years ago

    by Monica

    Thanks!
    I have loved to write and read poetry for a long time, and now that I have found this site I've been showing people what I have. I thank you for my 5, it means lots me since Im so young. I really never thought I was really THAT good, but you really boosted my confidence! :-)

  • 21 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    Hey! I really liked this poem, I can relate to it! good job! 5!

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