Great poem man, as usual. I loved the choice of words you use to describe things. They really make your poems stand out and make you feel as though it were you writing it.

Another wonderful poem! Your poems are always written so well, you're fantastic! Please keep it up and be sure to take care of yourself! =)

~Grace

Wonderful!!!

The IMAGERY IS OUTSTANDING AND SO IS THE STUCTURE NOT TO MENTION THE BEAUTIFUL HEART FELT PASSION

"No poet on this earth can capture your beauty in a book,
Ur beauty is such,even the stars come out and have a look,"
lucky girl!! no 1s ever praised me in such a beautiful,romantic way! lucky girl!!!!!!!