So I took the pills and watched my wrists bleed...

by Kaitlyn   Oct 16, 2004


As my wrists are bleeding, I fall to the ground
No one's around, they don't hear a sound
My hands have turned blue and I'm getting so weak
The phone rings, I don't answer, for I can not speak

She'll come home and find me and question God why
Why did this happen and why did I die
The guilt will come soon 'cause she knows its her fault
The pains finally over and has come to a halt

She'll call 911 and tell them I'm dead
Her carpets are stained such a beautiful red
She'll cry and she'll lie and she'll wish it weren't true
As she looks at my body such a beautiful blue

Attending the funeral she pretends to be brave
As she quietly places a flower on my grave
The sky turns darker and rain starts to pour
I wish I'd had some one to live life for

A simple, kind person to love and to hold
But instead I'm 6 feet under, dead and so cold
'Cause no one was there in my time of need
So I took the pills and watched my wrists bleed

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jackie

    That's really, really great, sad, but fantastic..

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    She'll call 911 and tell them I'm dead
    Her carpets are stained such a beautiful red: dont you love the color of your own blood, dont die...just be depressed and smile a lot...thats a really good poem, i usually dont critique cause i dont feel its my place, but i think you should write more...its really good, but it sucked when it ended...good poem...Lee nicole

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Val

    Wow, omg, i felt the emotion, the tension, it was really good this poem! I really liked it the way it flowed everything!