Comments : Broken

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow =) Very good 5/5!
    Take Care

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Your style in writing kinda reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe, and i really love the idea of your poems. Beautiful poem. I think ill add u to my favorites. Good job, 5-5 and nothing less.
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by ((Allison))

    Very nicely done. Keep writing.

    XOXO
    Forgotten

  • 19 years ago

    by Georgi

    wow this is really powerful. a lot of emotion love it xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by TheOrder

    that was genius... probably the best poem i've read yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    wondeful poem, although it depicts as sad and dark image it was well written and flowed really well. Well done. keep writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    Wow... you are really good... You seem to have a different type of Style... which I totally love....
    xox Sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    wow.. i loved that poem alot..good work..a 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristy Green

    damn girl, u got mad skill. keep doin the damn thing and I'm lokin foroward to reading some new ones. peace- much love

    kristy

  • 19 years ago

    by Hina

    Ananya, All of your poetry symbolizes pain, and darkness...Lighten up your life with God, and keep writing...you write like an Angel...:)

    ~Hina

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    you are amazing!!!! LOL! I loved this poem. Read more later. yeh i will add you to my favourites :)

  • 18 years ago

    by saurabh_poeticheart

    hey nice one , i liked it 5 frm me, do check mine too and keep up ur good work

  • 18 years ago

    by saurabh_poeticheart

    hey nice one , i liked it 5 frm me, do check mine too and keep up ur good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    I love it!!! i never thought i'd really enjoy a poem about cutting but this is really good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by NessaMessa

    that was great i loved it :D :D

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    wow.. i lyk this poem.. its reli gud, especially that u use those "big words" lol.. ur rhyme was perfect.. gud goin

  • 18 years ago

    by greenmunky

    good poem. i liked it a lot

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    The imagery in this piece works really well, as I felt myself drawn into the picture by your use of descriptive language.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I love the titled its sounds very interesting and it flowed well

    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    ASGDLSGD.
    I loved this poem. It's amazing.
    I think a bit commas, semi-colons, and periods would make it look a bit neater and even out the way the lines are set, but it's amazing.

    5/5