Deal

by faith   Oct 19, 2004


Sadness, anger, rage and hate.
all the emotions you feel when holding that blade.
slicing and dicing till your problems are all gone
alls you have is this deep cut that won't last long.
as the blood drops fall, your problems go away.
the feeling won't last long but it'll do for today.
life and death have now all become the same.
this is how you've you learned to deal with you pain.
all this blood will turn into a scab and that scab will soon become a scar.
and thats when you notice all those problems haven't really gone far.
you start wrapping your arm waiting for it to heal.
then you realize you need to find a safer way to deal.

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  • 19 years ago

    by faith

    love ya two drak stormy night...lol

  • 19 years ago

    by faith

    thank u so much for ur feedback and im really glad someone liked it ... but to be honest i used to cut myself but making the friends i've made i've done a complete 180 with my life.. thanx again for ur comment and i'll definitley take ur advice thanx.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    wonderful, you sound like a really pretty person...by the way you write, what a name to pick out for yourself, faith, its nice...you dont sound like you cut yourself, you just sound smarter then that, im not trying to judge you, i was just thinking...well, i really liked your poem, next time write more of your soul with the pen...if that makes sense, its just my opinion, but this poem was great...5
    Lee nicole

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