Dark Angel

by Bryce Ellner   Oct 19, 2004


Angel wings charred black as coal
From a frail body rise
Hair of silvery-white algow
And tender, deep'ning eyes.
They call her freak and demon-born
And curse her name not knowing
This pain she hides so deep inside
Wishing to stop her blood from flowing
Though wish she may, she cannot die
For immortal is her soul
Will she find her final haven,
And escape this place so cold?

(Shes a character in my story named Luna and shes also my favorite of all my characters.)

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  • 19 years ago

    by bianca

    wow! GREAT poem. I love it and wow can i ever connect to it. Like every one else said i give it a 5. better if i could. Keep wwriting i love your poems.
    Love Always
    PK
    PS thanks for talking to me over IM. It helped alto.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bryce Ellner

    Actually I've never written a fan fic, but I'll be sure to look into it. For now, though, I want to the story shes in now finished. Thanks for the comments everyone.

    --Bryce~

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    Hey long time sence i stopped by and read some of your work...aah don't ask i've been here and there Anyways i have some great ghost poems for you to read. I'm getting back in the swing of things again.

    For this poem now LOL....This was a great poem, the character great job, very creative, and i agree w/ sierra do you write fan fics for your character? Cause you should! Ok great poem you got a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by giggles

    loooooooooove it it was great keep it up
    and love to read the story
    luv ya hun
    ~giggles~

  • 19 years ago

    by Abbie

    I love this peom each line just flows into the next! i like the concept of the character too it sounds like an interesting story!!

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