i really enjoyed reading this! great flow.. but one thing i noticed was that there were plenty of spelling mistakes that you may want to change. good job!

You are displaying a great deal of versatility in your work and I am impressed if not slightly envious (lol) xx

pretty good. I liked it. 5/5 ~keep it up

-no more

Thats my kinda poetry! Good one..keep em comin!
~Hina

heyy i really liked that, it was very well written and it had strong imagery

Have you lost someone in war? I will spare you my few on the military, being from a family full of men and women who have served. I've lost too many not to be in awe of what they fight and some have dies for.

Indeed it is very inspirational. You have extraordinary talent Robert

not bad. 4/5
~Freak~

this poem was pretty good. ur a great poet keep up the good work 5/5

What another great written poem! Fabulous and greatly expressed :)

great job, ur an excelent poet, keep up the good work, thanks for the comments