this is a song? wow, its awesome...no, wonderful....no, excellent....no...oh i dont know! its just great! lol

Thanx for being nice...

hmmm ok look i hate to be the rain on ur parade(well actually......heh heh).. but it's a tad cliched, the lyrics seem to be a mix of ur poems..danzig's die darling die(ony this is the reverse) and ooof the crimson skiesa again!!! gawd i'm tired of tht one!! but yet...pretty creepy..paper troll ...ahhh..i wanna hear u sing it!!

oh and i don't think it's deluged 'in' it's probably deluged 'by'...

Hmm thanx

I... wow. Woah that was amazing! Incredible! 5/5

Keep up the awesome work!

xox, PorteR

ok really that was your first song? That was really great. But on the other side it kinda flowed like some of your poems i've read. But other than that it was really great.

Wat do you mean by it flowed can u plz ellaborate