Hollow Darkness

by Atahan Tolunay   Oct 20, 2004


Whats this sound I hear again
Middle in the night while I sleep
Something icy goes through my vein
The fear strikes hard and deep

Down the stairs I go to see
Face my fears I have to do
I start to make a count to three
Down I go my heart is true

Never ending stairs I face
Infinitely deep darkness I pass
I wonder what is this place
It's myself I have to surpass

Bottom and the end I've reached
Only to find an empty hole
This darkness I have now breached
I look into my own soul

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    i agree w/ timothy, The last line really made the poem come together as a whole! You have powerful words.
    i thought i would read some of your poems sence we've been going back and forth on the forum page. Anyways I really enjoyed this one.

  • 19 years ago

    by Atahan Tolunay

    Yes, I just love poems with a little surprize or twist at the end. It makes it more thoughtprovoking.

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy

    You almost got a 4 on this poem, but when I read the last line, I really liked how it concluded so i gave you a 5.

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