lol I hope so to
Thank you for reading it=)

another good one buddy

great poem josiah....

oh, good thing it wasn't more than a dream...good work...

"Thanks for taking up some of my love
Thanks for wasting my time
Thanks for stealing some of my love"

^ I think it'd be better if you replaced "my love" from the first or last line of that part, it would be better...seems too much like the same thing..... Maybe even something like "Thanks for stealing some of my heart" ...just a suggestion, I don't really know what else to put in there...maybe you could come up with something...

xxx

I like this one like you are riht in the mild of your dream so cool :) great work 5/5
xoxo robyn