Relief

by Luz   Oct 22, 2004



Time and Time and Time again
The cuts, the blood, euphoria

Feel it, all the frustration
The anger, the want the desperation

Lock yourself in; make sure it’s shut
Create an excuse ahead of time
Finally it’s time to cut

Feel the scars, Lets make another
Beautiful, deadly, a reminder
I’ve survived

Dig it deep, drag it slow
Feel it, The Pain, The Emotion

Over and Over, Deeper and Deeper
Let it flow, liquid pain

Is it enough?
No, Deeper, Longer, Harder
The pain is great tonight

Let yourself feel, Feel it all
Let your feelings guide your hand

The anger, Deeper, The pain, Deeper
The Heartbreak, Harder, The sadness, Harder

Let it flow, watch it close
The memories flow, The feelings flow
Bright red, Let it flow

Elevation, Finally, Disattachment, Just in Time
No feelings, Nothing, Relief, Life

By. Luz Ramirez

* This poem is about cuttin which i think is clear I'm trying a new style tell me what you think*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Rachael/7MidniteTears

    the style is not that bad. the rhyming was a little off but i didn't notice that when i was reading it. this was beautifully written and written like a true poet.