Thoughts

by Luz   Oct 22, 2004


Collapsed Breathless, “Please stay out”

Crying, In Pain, “ Please stop hurting me”

Eyes Shut, Breath Heavy, “ I have no hope”

Trembling, Dizzy, “ Don’t make me do it”

Bleeding, Groggy “I made the same mistake”

The thoughts, they come, they go, those terrible thoughts, they consume.

Silently, Swiftly, They take control, They guide me, They are me

Tired, Broken, “Maybe your right”

Abandoned, Confused, “ Should I take my life”

The thoughts they tell me, They push me towards the light

They take over, I am nothing, Another soul, lost, in the endless night

Dying, Torn, “ I wish it wasn’t so

Dead, Gone “ I no longer have control”

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    truly amazing! you seem like a truly talented writer! please keep in touch!
    lexi lou

  • 19 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    Wow. That was VERY powerful. I loved it. I feel the poem very deep.