Very cool, Jacki, and maybe you are like me and like to let the reader IMAGINE what the words are about, would you mind telling ME (I'm sooo special aren't i?) what the darkness in disguise is???? PLease???

ooh, i really like this one!

actully you are 100% right on that lucifer.....

O WOW!! that was fantasticooooooooo

i really liked how you used the symbolism "darkness in disguise" it gives a sort of picture as to the darkness that your referring to. i really liked the imagery and lines you used that really made you think, good job

thank you so much for all your comments :) can't wait to read some of your poems

Very good but you never really mention what this menice is. A good read but left too open for me needs to close it up but a good job left me reading anyway take care and if you get time check out my work

Wow Jackie, I really loved this poem a lot, you really write in this genre very very well, Im in awe of your talent. Tim

Well done, needs a bit of clean up, then maybe re read a few times to help the flow, but other than that its wonderful, keep up the good work

to roberts comment the menice would be my own dark thoughts. But I wrote this poem many years ago this is the poem actully that got me writing the darker side. But thanks everyone so much for you comments ;)