I think not

by Nicholas   Oct 23, 2004


I know for long I won't be here,
But do they even see?
Will any of them shed a tear,
When they've seen the last of me?
Oh, answer just this question,Lord,
Tell me only this,
When I'm finally dead and gone,
Will I even be missed?

I think not
So here I am
with this razor
In my hand
I cut once
I cut twice
Hoping to
end my life

Oh, isn't it ironic
How fatal life can be
And though I focus on it
I know I have no destiny
So answer just this question
And tell me only this
When I'm six feet under
Will I even be missed?

It's an odd poem. But that's because I was writing a song that I couldn't finish. Sorry for the crappy work guys. But I needed to write it down before I forgot it. Thanx for wasting ur time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    Sadly I frrl that way sometimes bur anyway great work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    It's not crappy! And I'm not wasting my time. It was really good... But the part about "When I'm finally dead and gone, Will I even be missed" Yes, you will be missed. I'd even miss you, AND I DON'T KNOW YOU!

  • 19 years ago

    by WhiSperNcUrsIVe

    It's not crappy...I'll waste my time...I ain't got nothing better to do with it! I spend my life on the computer! HANG IN THERE!

  • 19 years ago

    by erin

    I like it. I can feel the pain.

  • 19 years ago

    by La Muse Angelique

    I liked it too, keep up the good work.

    Take care