Very good, very touching. Keep up the good work.

thanks

hey that poem was good, i really liked it, if you get a change comment some of time Thanx

I thought that is avery well written poem, very emotional and a lot of feeling. I don't know if this is true or not, but you did a very good job. keep it up and take care

its really awesome. i like how it sounds like its a person but it turned out to be cancer. keep writing. much love -cal

this is a great poem, very very sad and touching, great job. i loved it.

aw...I thought that poem was really good! its so sad!

Great poem, it had a great story line, the rhythum was kind of off though. Awesome job anyways, keep writing.
Love,

-Blue

very sad but i like how u wrote it... it flowed pretty ok =) i gave it a 5 =) hope u pass by mine sometimes... much love...

wow.. that poem was amazing.. Your a great writer! Keep up the good work

that nearly made me cry and thats hard to do

this is a great poem,
Ur work is amazing...
Keep writing

Omg this poem rocks its sad but awsome check me out csometime and keep righting u rock

ehy this is a really good poem if its ture i hope u get better soon

thank you so much everyone. just so you know, this is not a true story, my mom is alive, although she hates me and i hate her too...but i wrote this in honor of my boyfriend, his mom passed away three months ago after being on comatose for 7 months. it was very hard for him, and he still cries to me sometimes. anyways, thanks for commenting.

great poem.. so sad

thanks

It's a good poem....good job

aww, that's really sad.

thank you so much