no, its not a true story. i wrote it in honor of my boyfriend whose mom died 3 months ago and hes taking it hard.

I dont think that I ever sobbed so hard in any poem I have ever read. I dont know if the person is you at the age of five and you are reliving it or what, but I put myself there and I felt you so much. Not only was this so beautiful, it is so realisitic. I would love to read anything else you have written. Please let me know if there is anything else.

OMG!! im bawling here...man you know how to make people cry and write a good poem..I'm so sorry if this is for real...i'm here to comfort you if you need someone...please dont look at this like its just another comment cause im here to help you or just be a friend if you need it..god gave you a wonderful give..this poem deserves more then a freakin 5!! Great job....much love to you...God bless
~Chelsey~

thank you so much

awww.... that's a beautiful very touching poem. hope it didn't happen to you. take care

WOW that was touching

thanks

that was a sad but touching poeem.did that really happen?If so i'm so sorry I know how it is to loose your mother and in a terrorable way.

that was a sad but touching poeem.did that really happen?If so i'm so sorry I know how it is to loose your mother and in a terrorable way.

AWWW its good! really really sad but i liked it! Some of the things didnt seem right 4 a five year old 2 say like in the begining but then it got really good...nice job

WOW that was super good, i almost cried:( it sounded true, but if not ur a super good writer!!!

WOW... AWESOME! :-)

wow... awesome!

hey kara hunn its annah this poem is really good !

lol, thanks annah..and no. im not talking to myself

a very good poem, its really sad..

thanks

My mom had cancer when I was little too, around 5 actually, but my mom thank God Made it through, but I understand all of the questions that you may of had, I had them to, but all things happen for a reason, I hope that helps you get through, this was a very well written poem.

lol thanks

i really hope this isnt ture but if it is you should know that this was not your fault. I hope you keep writing

love krysie