My first love

by amiee   Oct 29, 2004


It was love at first sight
and it all moved so fast
you were my boyfriend
before two weeks passed

we had the best relationship
anyone could ever hope for
we shared a love
i had never felt before

it all started so fast
the end was sudden too
and my only regret is that
i couldn't make it up to you

you inspired me and
we grew up together
over time i thought
it might last forever

thats when it all fell apart
and I'm left with
tears in my eyes
and a broken heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by Leanne

    Hey Amiee, great poem. Break ups are always hard x x xsexcbishx x x

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Awsum poem hunnay

  • 19 years ago

    by Jackie Bilson

    Hey Amiee, great poem. Break ups are always hard hon, especially first loves. I know, I had my heart crushed well, pulverised more like it, by my first love and my best friend... I hope things get better for you :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Beautiful Drama

    I love this poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Hey hun
    Ur poems are awsum thx for the comment about mine Id be glad to help u out writing some even tho urs are really awsum :O) xoxo

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