Mommy You The Only One In My Life
by MWHSchk Oct 31, 2004
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Your the only one in my life mommy thats saves me from he dark mommy I don't think I would have been here today if is wasn't for your love mammy sometimes I wish I wasn't here but it's only b/c daddy was never around mommy I need your help I dunno if I can go on I wish daddy was here to help you out but it seems like he never will be mommy I love you your my only life you helped get here and now its my job to live by your rules well mommy for now I guess I will go I will go and hope for another day for you to help me with my life |
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20 years ago
by Eibutsina
Really heart felt and sweet dedication to your mother this poem - great work. I have a bit of feedback for you tho - my advice is to be careful for spelling mistakes (use the spell check engine on the sight and proof read your work before posting) also set the format of your poem how you would like the reader to read it (separate lines, keep grammar in mind also) besides that I think you have done a wonderful job that your mum would be proud of :o)
Luv Eirisa
