Together Under The Pouring Rain

by DooDee   Nov 3, 2004


You held my hand so tight
And together we ran
Under the pouring rain
We ran as fast as we can

I was very happy
Joy filled my heart
Happiness washed down me
And covered every part

We laughed and laughed
We sang every love song that people have ever sung
We were flying , we reached the clouds
Between them , that’s where we have hung

I love you
You screamed under the heavy rain
I was totally happy
How did I mange to stay sane !

Suddenly you lift me up
Held me tight and was turning around
In circles and circles
I was over meld with joy , didn’t hear a sound

Soon we were losing our minds
We suddenly found ourselves in a small park
We played with the slides
We swung crazily in the dark !

After all this madness I was tired
I quietly sat on the park's soft sand
You came and sat next to me
We counted the park as our very own land !
You started to draw shapes
You drew me a small heart with your strong hand
You cut a string from your blouse
You tided it around my finger as a band

Oh Baby girl you are mine
no one will take you from me
Together Forever
That’s what we will be

Until that happy day comes
The day that I will propose
Keep this band in your finger
As a wedding ring I suppose

That way all the world will know
That are taken , you belong to someone
No one will try to take you
I will be against the world , against everyone

I love you girl
I am mad about you
I have feelings in my heart
That no one ever felt , no one ever knew
If I want to be the happiest guy in the world
I would only ask God to have you

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  • 19 years ago

    by DooDee

    thanx alot for everyone that commented :D i really appreciate it :D and ur comments make me know my failures and successes :D u rock guys:D thanx

  • 19 years ago

    by Abbie

    Aw such a sweet poem! i could totally imagine the scene in my head!! You must really have something special! i hope things stay that way!!! xxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    aww your poem is so sweet,
    you are a really great writer

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Very sweet and beautiful poem, it paints a movie in my mind :) you lucky girl, I wish the best with your man, :) keep up the good work, and take care :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sweet As Sugar

    heeeey gurl !
    i looove ur poem !
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