yep, i agree with keri. it was a great read. the rhyming was very nice. i don't know about the category- where it is now suits it or if your not satisfied, i'd say the other choice would be sad poems. take care:)

Wow Erin, Im so in awe of these words you have written, This is one of my favorites, no doubt. I ts so sad yet conveys so many feelings that we all must plow through at times..beautifuuly written. Love, Tim

this is great! i really enjoyed reading this. the wording was wonderful. beautiful piece of poetry!

Very inspirational turn in this poem. I loved it.

This is written realy well.I could realy feel your emotion when u wrote it.great job

very well done!