Suicide

by natasha   Nov 4, 2004


Every day i pray to die
I've given up on hows and whys
people cant understand or know
its hard to let my feelings show
in my life to failure I'm prone
and no one will leave me alone
I cant do better don't you see
this is all i do being me
pushing harder will only break
break my soul and my feelings take
death is my last and final choice
since no one listened to my voice
crying out for someone to come
nothing's left but my felling numb
but my feeling numb does not work
and death around the corner lurks

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  • 17 years ago

    by speculative_scene

    This poem sucks. you suck. you are a stupid and horrible person.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sami

    It's so sad, the emotion is mirrored through the words, and i'm sure so many people can relate to it! It's beautifully written though...
    - Keep it up -
    - Sami -
    xox

  • 19 years ago

    by natasha

    thanks elizabeth sure ill email you. thanks for commenting

  • 19 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    This is a very great poem! I really like it! Great job! I'm sorry if you really feel this way beacause you are very talented and deserve so much more! If ya ever wanna talk about something or need advise, you can e-mail me azucar08@hotmail.com
    ~*Elizabeth~

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    yes- it was sad but beautifully written. in fact it could very well be a biography of me a long time ago. i hope you'll cheer up soon! take care:)

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