Me And Him

by DooDee   Nov 7, 2004


I wrote this poem at a late hour .. its kida fuuny and sweet , i hope that u read and comment :D thanx
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I was a girl
He was a boy
I gave him a cookie
He bought me a toy
I made him laugh
He brought me joy

I was a lady
He was a guy
I helped him with chicks
Taught him how to approach them and say hi
He helped me with lads
When they ended everything with a goodbye

I told him he was special
He told me I was very sweet
I told him that I care about him
He told me that I make his heart beat

I was his bride
He was my groom
He was my brightening sun
I was his sweet, beautiful moon

He was the first one to say
I love you
I was the one to answer his vows with
Yes , I do

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  • 19 years ago

    by DooDee

    thanx alot for everyone that voted and commented :D i would like to say that this is not true .. just a lil story that jumped out of my mind and into the paper :D hope that u liked it :D

  • I thought it to be a well written poem. It was sweet. It didn't have a whole lot of depth though. Still, it was good.