omg that poem really made me think.. i got shivers just reading it.. thank you SO much for posting it.. really need to think about that one.
i love that poem tho it was written really good!

this such a sad but beautiful poem! if you have time, pls read mine too. i'm just new here. and i haven't posted all my poems yet. keep it up,. god bless

Thanks. I haven't wrote many poems that I am really all that proud of, but I think this one has a lot meaning, it's one of my favorites, and I'm glad y'all like it too.

Thanks
Love Always and Forever
Casondra

holy sh*t ... that was holy sh*t ...i'm speechless which has never happened to me... wow.... thats all i can say

WOW! That poem is Great. Um is it true? Any way keep up the good work.

excellent poem. well written .

This poem touches me but reminds me of who i truely am, and this girl soulds like me and i sumtimes want to take that route, but i am afriad of the loved ones i will leave behind, but it is so hard for me to constrate sometimes that SUICIDE rings in my head, i don't think that it is a way out but i see it as a healer, if i really cause people pain and i am full of pain me leave earth could be the best! Ur poem was good keep ur writting up!

Lyssa

Wow, awesome poem. Your format was great and you put so much emotion and feeling into your writing that you made the harsh reality hit hard. It gave me goosebumps!!! I hope that people will read my own poetry and be as impressed with it as I am of yours.

Very good poem…

”The happiest person and your best friend
Could be the next suicide”

It was and I couldn’t stop her… she was broken inside… she wouldn’t let me help her.
I hope others don’t have to go through that…

Very good...

The happiest person and your best friend
Could be the next suicide

It was and I couldn't stop her... she was broken inside... she wouldn't let me help her.
I hope others don't have to go through that...

OMG, is it true? this a really sad poem,this poem express how i feel,i can really relate to this poem.5/5 keep up the good work.

Its defiantly a very good poem an you should be proud x x x x x its very very good. x x x x x

I'm speechless this is great im voting !!

I love this poem. It made me cry, its so powerful and emotional =(
But is fantasticly written
And I do love it =)
5/5

"Read between the lines
Because everyone has lied
The happiest person and your best friend
Could be the next suicide"

thats a painful line and so true.
great amazing job!!! 5/5