Make me! Make me!

by ANNE   Nov 10, 2004


You can make me say pleace, but you can't make me mean it.
You can make me apologize, but you can't make me think I'm wrong.
You can make me smile, but you can't make me happy.
You can make me cry, but you can't make me give up.
You can make me scream in pain, but you can't make me confess.
You can control my body, but never my soul.
So now you're sorry?
You can't make me forgive you!
You can be a part of my life, but you can't make me want you in my life!

Pleace comment! It is my very first poem, and I would like to know if I really suck or not c,") And by the way... Sorry if my english is not the best, I'm from Denmark.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    I like this poem good job! yea my msn thingy is dragstergirl14@msn.com

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    a lot of thought went into this poem i believe

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    hey, i thought your poem wo good especially since its ypur first one!keep trying you'll be great! Luv Lil Luce x