by Daniel Mulvany Nov 12, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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His hands so tightly grip her as she stumbles to the ground. |
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Full of emotion.. as usual... great work! |
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Wow, this was very emotional it brought a tear to my eye!! I hope this isnt a true life story!!! But you did an extrodinary job!! I couldnt change a thing, your a very talented writer!! 6/5!! WONDERFUL!! |
by Natalie
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Aw wow, This was sad. But really good though. Maybe if you turned it into stanza's it might be easyier to follow, But that's just me, But other then that. I loved it 5/5 |
by Kay
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hey babe! i havent read your poems in a while so i have to catch up here. but this one is so good. your a great writer and i love your poems. keep it up! love ya! 5/5 |