Comments : Close to perfect

  • 19 years ago

    by Bobby Brownlie

    hey great poem molly i know what you mean i am affraid too!!!! i have been hurt so many times i am affraid when a friend says to me i have somenoe who might like you. and i lie and say no i am talking to someone right now, when i am really not. it is because i don't want to get hurt again like you said in the poem. i love rewading your poems because i relate to every word of every poem that you write. great job girl if ya need anything let me know i am here for ya.
    take care sweetie
    love you forever
    -bobby-

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    thanks, glad you can relate!!
    love ya,
    -Molly

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    THANKS!

  • 19 years ago

    by Dana.

    This is such a great poem!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥kHarIsMa♥

    GREAT poem...it gave me the chills....keep writin...

  • 19 years ago

    by VMAL

    Great poem. I feel exactly like the girl you described in the poem. You did a great job at expressing thoughts.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann

    Hey, great poem! I really enjoyed it and know exactly how you feel. Your poems are very well done. Keep writing!

    Also if you have time maybe you could tell me what you think of mine..maybe help me out 'cause yours are really good.

    -Ann

  • 19 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Wow, I can really relate to this poem. I felt that way until I finally closed my eyes, crossed my eyes, and took a dive (heart first) into love, and now I've got the best boyfriend I've ever had and everything's so much better than it used to be. I've been both a heart-breaker and heart-broken, and niether side is too good to be on, but love is just one of those things. Keep your hopes up, girl, and don't be afraid.
    Love Always,
    Kate