Comments : Was so young

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem but that is so sad! i hope that never has to happen in real life because that is just awful.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shana

    This poem is not from personal experience, but it has happened many times before with kids and their parents guns. I honestly can't tell you where I got the inspiration for this poem, I don't even know...

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Very nice Shana. Different from anything i've ever read before. Well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Awesome poem, you keep coming up with good ones, although it is sad, I liked it. Good Work

  • 19 years ago

    by Shana

    thanks for the comments everyone I really appreciate them! :) be sure to look at my others they are pretty good also...

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    I just wanted to say that I enjoy this poem and that you should keep on writing:) *Take Care* ^God Bless^
    ~Check some of them~

    ~!~Love Sedusha~!~

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Very heartfelt, very amazing, I loved it, very sad you are an amazing writer