I really liked the ending of that poem it was something that I can relate to my father is a dead beat dad.

i totally relate. my dad is a horrible person. stand strong thru the mess. babygirl, u r better than u think

I love the poem.. I cannot relate becuae i love my dad with all of my heart he is the best, but i know friends going throught the same thing... stay strong

really good poem, i hate my father as well.. thanks for commenting on my poem.. keep writing xox FIVE.. ~*samz~*

Very nicely written!!! That was really good!

This poem is very relateable for me. You wrote it well for it not being based on your actual experiance. Keep up the good work, you are great.
With love, K. Kristina

well good poem m8!
jess
xxoxoxoxox

AwEsOmE... you are a very talented writer! I think many people can relate... i know i can but it's your words that help us confront others that they are not the only one who feels that way!