i'm so sorry about your cousin!! i would have killed myself after that!! i've never really lost someone i loved but in know what your saying!

sarah hunny, i luv u so much. u were there, she did not die alone, u helped her in that way...so much. her last memories were of u, she new wat kind of person u r, jus as i no. i owe my life 2 u sarah! u hav 2 let her go, keep her in ur heart but no that u did everything 2 save her. she knew u loved her, she really did!!!!! comin hun, its gonna be alright!

luv ya bubba, Erin

thanx lost-forgotten, ii apreciate you commenting alot, i very nearly did kill myself but its all ok now. erin i love ya but i cant let her go, it was my fault for not hleping more or goin to check on her sooner. and sally, thankyou for your comment and im sorry about your brother in law .... chin up guys :)

I am so sorry about your cousin. Atleast she had someone there to hold her while she died. No one deserves to die specially not by their own deed. I wish you and your family and friends the best of luck. You seem to have put a lot of work into this poem and it is great. Keep up the good work and keep your head up, tomorrows always a new day. Bless you child.

Keep your head up high!
Baby ~ B
Crazyblonde4life2007@yahoo.com

i know how u feel!!! it's just such a huge shock when u lose someone close to u without warning..a frd of mine whom i practically grew up with died in a hit n run accident six years ago..at first i just felt numbed...nothing seemed real anymore....every memory of her became nightmares for me...and i couldn't help thinking tht she died in so much pain alone on a highway..with me miles away not even realizing it...and tht hurt...but neway keep writing ,u have a very direct no nonsense style which is very refreshing

hey im very very sorry 4 ur loss and taht of ur family .. i do know how u feel my bro took his life when he was 13 and it was teh hardest thing 4 me to let him go wlel actaully its been 2 yr snow and i still cant get over it ..i wrote bout it aslweel its called in memory .. ur poem was beautiful and i know shes lookign down on u and is happier now and knows how much u love an dmiss her .. as long as u keep her close to ur heart shes never gone

awww, very lovely poem!! i cannot believe her mom was more worried about the blood on her carpet! how cruel! i hope she is free now away from this awful place. but i am sorry for your loss! i hope you will feel better...

thankyou all....i mean it, thankyou

what a sad poem, but cute nonetheless... im sure she knows you love her dearly and that you will miss her and think about her until your dying day...
~M