Dear Eli

by .x.PorteR.x.   Nov 16, 2004


Dear Eli;

I miss you.
Do you miss me?
I can’t seem to forget
That date.
24th of May, 2004.
9:57 pm.
You were coming for me.
And you ended up
Dead.

I feel guilty.
It’s all my fault.

I miss you so much.
I love you.
You know that already,
Right?

I can’t wait to see
You again.
To ruffle your hair,
And whisper in your ear,
“I love you.”
To see you, just to watch.
I miss you.

I promise, it’s not long
‘Til I see you again.
Not long now.

Love, Bec.

[[P.S. - thanks for the concern Lizzy, but this one's actually fictional =) it's good to know you care tho =) sorry to make you worried...

Yeah, this is a piece of fiction.]]

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  • 19 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Thats sad : ( Good too though! Great job. I learned feeling guilty though doesn't really help. I felt so guilty about my friend i lost but now i just pray for her and thats all i can do. I hope your ok.
    ~lots of luv!~

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    awww, that's sad! but as KT said...awesome poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~Bloodied&Broken

    Go Porter! Another awsome poem :D

    LUV YA!

    -KT

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