Comments : Underneath those sleeves

  • 16 years ago

    by deadnalone

    wow thats amazing u got huge talent that really honestly it is just like it i hope you have managed to stop, i havent

  • 16 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    You have a great talent, this is a great poem. I loved it, and its true, you never do know what people are actually feelin, just cause they have a smile on their face doesnt mean they are ok. Great job. You did it again

  • 16 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Amazing poem Chloe...I loved it...so well written...wish you the best love xxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 16 years ago

    by Amy~Lynn

    Wow! I love that poem! I can relate so0o0o much! Stay strong and keep writing...i'll try 2 b strong 2 but i also have my darkest secrets underneath my sleeves...I wish u the best of luck! And plz read all of my poems and comment on wut u think of them...thx so0o much! Much Luv, .:.Amy K.:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hailey

    That was amazing...u captured the thoughts of a cutter/selfharmer..good insight...to ppl like me and u and others..bye

  • 16 years ago

    by ?

    great poem, totally explains everything to ppl, can relate to it so well, keep writing my dear, take care
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Krystal Ross

    This is a wonderful poem, not nessaraly the subject but you have done a great deal of work and did very well. THis is a moving poem that sends chills up my spine, i have a friend that cuts or did, but shes no longer doin that. i hope if this is true that you can also overcome this horrid hobby and become a beautiful person weither others think so or not. but congrats on writeing a poem this great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Madison

    1 word.. AMAZING! whoa can you say tallent! keep it up!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    Wow..awesome poem...loved it just loved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Terray

    you did an awesome job I loved the poem how I feel also I loved it I would give it a 20 out of 5 if I could
    -Terray

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    Hey, awesome poem. It was really deep and moving and soo very true.

  • 16 years ago

    by kel

    Wow great poem...i can really relate...i feel all alone and fake..but my friends dont even notice
    please keep on writing
    ur awsome

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria

    Wow amazing poetry. That's so sad...you really don't know how people feel and when others put you down..you only can smile about it..and pretend everything is okay. I hope your doing good and life gets better (if this is about you) :( Love, Tori* KEEP writing..I'll visit your poetry more often.

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria

    Wow amazing poetry. That's so sad...you really don't know how people feel and when others put you down..you only can smile about it..and pretend everything is okay. I hope your doing good and life gets better (if this is about you) :( Love, Tori* KEEP writing..I'll visit your poetry more often.

  • 16 years ago

    by sarah jenkins

    I really enjoy this poem, its very well written and good, keep up your wonderful writting! if you could, would you comment on mine?
    Thanks,
    Sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by sara b

    from one cutter to another i can understand. this is dark yet great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Paula

    That was excellent, its almost my story. i undestand parts as i self harm. like you said behind smiles you can uncover secrets but some people are blind to you. looking forward to reading more of your poems. xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by stephyG

    omg great poem.. its so true and touching.. keep up da great work!! mWaZZzz

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaylee

    this poem was really good... i know exactley what its like to go through all the pain... if you get a chance check out my poems and tell me what you think

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenn

    heyy i loved your poem and i soo feel the same. i have a poem that i wrote just today and i think you would like it. it's called , to my people, for some reason when i read your poem i thought about how i fell right now and the first thing i thought of was my poem.. our poems are very similar and have the same idea. i would love it if you could read my poem and comment on wat you thought of it.. it would mean a lot to me... well till next time i'll ttyl

    ~*~Jenn~*~