Comments : Underneath those sleeves

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenn

    heyy i loved your poem and i soo feel the same. i have a poem that i wrote just today and i think you would like it. it's called , to my people, for some reason when i read your poem i thought about how i fell right now and the first thing i thought of was my poem.. our poems are very similar and have the same idea. i would love it if you could read my poem and comment on wat you thought of it.. it would mean a lot to me... well till next time i'll ttyl

    ~*~Jenn~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenn

    haha oopss

  • 16 years ago

    by BaybeBlew

    Awesome poem, I've never cut, and I'm kind of against the idea, probably just because I don't understand but its awesome how you worded this entire poem, good job.
    Love,

    -Blue

  • 16 years ago

    by Krete

    Such a Good Title. Such a Good Poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    oh, the chills runnin thru my spine. i used to be a cutter (still occasionally go back) and well , i just wanted to say that this was an amazing poem & i prolly sound like everyone else but i truly just love this b/c i know, i know...lol. well, u can get help if u truly want to quit. its hard but all can do it. loves.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow great hard hittin poem!LUCY XX

  • 16 years ago

    by sami

    this was exactly how i feel you described it very well this is something i can show someone who wants to understand why and why he shouldnt judge me

  • 16 years ago

    by Just me

    I used to cut and i realized it doesnt do anything but make it worse... I hid my feelings for so long so i know were your commin from..great poem..

  • 16 years ago

    by Kara

    that's the best poem ive read that really helps thanx i know how it feels and ive stopped and i hope you can too keep on writing

  • 16 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Wow that was wonderful. I can relate to it too, i stop off and on but it's one of those things that's so hard to quit because you start to rely on it. I like the part that each cut tells a different story, because it's so true, i also liked the ending, even though i hide mine under my watch. Very nicely done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Sanctuary ©

    Hey,, this was an excellent poem... I know how you feel... Though, i've stopped cutting before i got carried away with it..... But i know what you mean... Take Care
    Angel

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacob Davis

    Great poem, I do understand what you feel, although I don't cut, I have before, but it's hard to relieve my self with self infliction when I have close to no pain threshhold. Great Poem Tho.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lauren Lee

    Great poem! I cut to so i completely understand! Love, lauren

  • 16 years ago

    by Queen Marlene

    wow!! that is so beautiful!!! i can relate to this poem cause i am a very smiley talkative person but no one ever sees the real me!!! the one inside!! all they see is the pretty face!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ryan

    Hey that was an awesome poem all u need to work on is your parallelism... try reading some of mine....

  • 16 years ago

    by callie

    wow... totally awesome. i like the last part a lot. you have a lot of talent. keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by kathy

    thats is so good and i know personally thats its true

  • 16 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    whoa, i am speechless, that poem was truly amazing, you couldnt improve it any better, u have enormous talent, dont put it to waste, xox ~*~samz~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by *K~L~C*

    very good poem! and i wish the best for you! i know its hard and im not judging you cuz ive tried cutting but it just doesnt help but it does for you and if thats the only source of relief for you so be it i just hope that you can keep living and keep writing! luvd it

  • 16 years ago

    by Debra

    i kno exactly what u mean (being 1 oth those ppl hu has done it 2) & it's amazing how u put it in2 such good words. ur poems r great, keep writing.