short but full of meaning!

Wow, thats sad. Good job though. I'm sorry if you really feel this way :(

Another good one, and thanks for the comments.

Excellent...very short:p impressive:D

i liked it good job

It was very chilling and creepy and I really liked it. Good job.

Loved it!...wonderful

Take care always,
Kalah

I hate poems like this! It's all I keep seeing...I mean it's good it's just so sad....Keep your head up and take care

very choppy, love the rythm...