Dying To Be Born

by Johnny Marlin 2   Nov 16, 2004


So Take This Life
I Hold In My Hand
But Do Treat It Dearly
Forever It Will Stand

Teach Her The Way
To Live In This Life
To Control The Hunger
To Hold Back The Strife

I Assure You It Is Tough
But You Must Go On
Just Be A Good Mentor
And Warn Her of Dawn

Tell Her The Stories
Both Good And The Bad
About Others Like Us
And The Glories We've Had

You Don't Have To Kill
Just Take What You Need
And Don't Get To Excited
When You See Someone Bleed

The Vampire's Curse
You Gave To This Female
Has Turned Her Undead
Now a Threat To All People

She Is In Your Hands Now
So Treat Her So Well
Because One Day You Know
We Will All Be In Hell

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  • 19 years ago

    by Angel of Broken Dreams

    Good poem. Not exactly spectacular, but bursting with talent. Well done. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    that was kewl..

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    Awesome. Very touching. I really like the ending..though i dont really agree. We arent going to all go to hell. Only those who have lived their lives in sin. But regardless of that, it was a really amazing poem. Short to the point rythm.

    §The Only Rose In This Desert§

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    Great poem. Simple but deep. I like the rythm as well. It doesnt get you lost in the words. It really was touching.

    §The only Rose in this Desert§

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel Sanctuary ©

    Hey... this was very good.... I loved it alot... You have talent i got to say... Keep on writing please.... And Take Care
    Angel

    P.s. That you for reading my story and poem.. Take care

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