I really liked this, but I'm not sure why. LOL It was short and to the point...it just hit home. Good work.

This one was good, i liked the rhyming and the idea and everything... keep it up =)

xox, PorteR

ooh, i really like this one!

it has a great point, and topic...well done and put together, but honestly, not to be rude, just a comment, vocabulary can really make a poem so intense...not that mine is huge, im jsut saying, but very good...
lee nicole

it has a great point, and topic...well done and put together, but honestly, not to be rude, just a comment, vocabulary can really make a poem so intense...not that mine is huge, im jsut saying, but very good...
lee nicole

I actually really like this poem. I'm not sure what it is exactly, but there's something really powerful about the message.

Great poem. And thank you for the comments on my poems :-D. Keep up the writing and never stop. Writing is very important to me and I will always stand up for it :-D

gd point. gd topic, gd poem...wel dun