Aww Andrea this was so good.. but so sad! :( I hope you're okay! Take care, hun!

lol i love it when your imagination gets creative! all your poems are creative and that makes them great! great poem! that's exactly how i feel ! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

i really like this!! it painted a picture in my mind! beautiful!!!
love blarg
p.s. could you maybe comment vote on some of my poems??? search the poem alltime sadness if you can
thanx!!!

Creativity makes your poetry original and excellent, beautiful poem, i love the last stanza!
Julie
-xx-

hunnie i hope your ok........ nice work, keep it up gurl!

i loved it!! good job!! thanks for your comments too!! love lenee

That was great! Everything flowed so smoothly..

beautiful is all i have to say right now

Awesome poem, and yes, very creative. Take Care and keep up the good writing. Take Care...

Very long!! Beautiful work

WOW! that's kool! I've got a tip- try to write a non- rhyming poem- you are awsome at writing poems with a lot of emotion and rhyming can take that away. Keep up the awsome work!

- Luv KT

wow, that was incredibly well written, it was really creative and it was easy to picture, awesome poem! keep it up x x :)

excellent poem... nothing confusing about it... i can relate to this poem.... somethin similar happened to me once... keep up the good writting....

THis is a very unique point of view on a lost love..i like it a lot

Great poem and nahh not to creative, easy to understand. 5/5 Keep it up. Look forward to more of yours soon. Peace and Love.
Check out some of mine too. Especially "meaningless" and let me know what you think. Thanks. Peace and Love

hey that was a really sad but sweet poem...nice work!:)

hey! you've got an awesome talent! keep up the good work. it's really creative and that's what makes it a great poem. maybe you could read my poems and give me some tips on how to write better. there are 2 under best friends and 1 under other sad poems! thanks

that was great it was very creative i like it but you were kind of right it was kind of confusing but one of the best parts about poems they make you think well it was a very good poem....see ya

amazinly beautiful