Offer

by jennifer   Nov 18, 2004


They said we'd never make it, but we proved all of them wrong. I love him, and he loves me, and forever we'll be together as one. What do you have to offer him, his friends did ask, but I would never hide behind my shaded past. This is what I can offer your friend, and I am sure many a man would want this too. I offer him... love for eternity, joy everyday he lives, happiness when he is sad, patience when he needs it most, trust so he never doubts the freedom I give him, faith to believe in himself, forgiveness whenever we may fight, and my whole life I would die to be his wife.

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  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Thank-you so much, that is one of the sweetest comments I have gotten, I really appreciate it

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Very beautiful and very sweet, that man is so lucky :) One suggestion would be to press "Enter" after each line, that would make the poem easier to read ;) but hey, no matter what, its still a great writing. keep it up. Take care :)

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Thank-you for all your comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    lovely poem!