Set Me Free

by Ashley Washer   Nov 18, 2004


I look around at all these people,
they call themselves my friends,
but none of them take the time to really see,
see how much I want everything to end.

I could sit across from them,
and slit my wrist,
but they would never see,
it's like in-front of their eyes,
theres a cloudy mist,
that won't let them believe.

They think my life,
is all peaches and cream,
but it's nothing like that,
if anything it's like a bad dream.

None of them can see my pain,
but I'm sure none of them want to,
as long as I'm there for them,
I guess thats all I'm need to do.

I ask someone to take my life,
to take it from me,
I don;t deserve it,
I just want to be free.

I just want this to end,
I want to be back to the old me,
the me that loved life and everything about tit,
but I know that can never be,
so please set me free.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Washer

    Thanks everyone for your comments, and your votes they all me a lot to me, and Megan.......I will talk to you later about this.

    Ashley

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel Sanctuary ©

    awww... well i wouldn't want you to be "set free" but you can be free... Wish i could help... feel better and take care of yourself
    Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by The Secret Keeper

    ash good poem, but i know you don't feel like this so i'll shut up and read some more of your poems

    ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Woah this is really good! U know if you ever wanna talk, i will listen and i will take notice. I kno how it feels to wanna give up everything.. xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by sarah k

    wow this poem describes my life exactly. my friends dont take the time to notice how im feeling and they never want to face the fact that i hate life and im never happy. but i really liked your poem. i thought it was well written. keep it up. i gave it a well deserved 5.

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