A divine love

by candy   Nov 21, 2004


O pray
i weep for that which i cannot possess
for i love thee
might i beg for thee to care as i do
sing for me, my love, the beautiful song
that i cannot sing for thyself
sing of the pain and blessing
that love in itself holds
o sweet sorrow to thine be true
paint me the picture i hold
paint me the darkness and paint me the light
show me that which thou feels
i love thee, doest thou love in turn
with this i beg, tarnish not thy lovers soul

*ya, i have never written like this before, but i thought id give it a try. please vote and comment*

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  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I think 4 your first time it was mature and you were brave i'd neva even try writing like that coz i know i'd suck:)
    Keep it up, normal or whatever
    xoxoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by candy

    thanks. go to my profile, i have written tons of normal ones, check them out or something, this is my first one thats weird like that.

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