great job! i enjoyed reading it a lot. keep up the good work!

Wow, Lipton...that's incredible! You have no idea how many times I have thought about all those things.

Thank you for submiting such a nice true piece of work I hope people listen happy thanks giving

I really love this poem!! I have friends who cut themselves and it scares me all the time and they wont believe me when i say that they will be missed.BUt anyway awesome poem and its so well written! Keep up the good work.Hope all is well : ]

i know the purpose of this poem is to question, but i think there's too many queries to my liking. i like the language though

wow, that was awesome. great job. i really liked it. lylab. ciao~Lee

Finally a person with balls enough to say how dumb it is to live in self pity. I am glad you wrote this I have heard so many want to hurt them selves taking a submissive approach to thier work esspecially when it comes to sucide you have done what I wanted to do for a long time slap the taste out of thier mouth good job and execllent work keep it up will be watching

wow. youre a really amazing writer. i hope you never quit. you have a gift.

Hey, I thought I comminted earlier, but I guess not, anyway, great poem! It is so true and most people don't even realize it. Anyway I'll see you later! (I'm going to get some der peeper :)) Peace

hey, i had a friend recommend reading this. i absolutely love it and can't wait to hear more from you.
<3 bella

Wow keep up the good work

Oh wow, This is the 1st poem I have read of yours and it's very well written. I had 2 read it twice because I didn't get the point the first time throught-but that was very creativly written-good job!!! Okay I'm off to read more of your work now...KIU!!

--Sierra Rae

Very strong message! I think very many of us often wonder about the "what if" of our existence...

You did an excellent job showing that everyone's life is important

that was really good!! loved it!! keep it up!! :)

Wow... your poem was amazing!! It really made me think. Very well written by the way! Well yea anyway... good job...keep writting... i look forward to reading more of your work!
-kayla-

wow, that was really great...i'm gonna send it to lizzie, i dont know if she's seen it, cause she hasn't commented on it...and you can probly guess why it'd relate to us...thnx so much...that guy was right, it totally true, and i'm glad you have the guts to put something like that out...people should know that they affect others and yaddayadda...it was really well written too...well, g2g ttyl!

Wow this is really good. I guess thats kinda how I feel sometimes.... Anyway, great poem. The flow was excellent.
~anne~

So true. and you wrote it so amazingly wonderful. I really mean it.
great poem and more important with
a great meaning. I agree with you.
much love,
marjan