Open your love

by Deathcanwait   Nov 25, 2004


Listen out, into the night,
Can you hear my pain?
My screams a forgotten trite,
My life a leech, mankind’s bane.

Open your eyes; look to the dark,
Can you see my torment?
In my eyes there is no spark,
My blood is cold and spent.

Open your soul let it soar,
So you can look down on me.
No peaceful ending to this war,
My mind never will be free.

Open your spirit let it fly,
Can you see me down?
All I do is hurt and cry,
Don’t kick me whilst I’m down.

Open your mind let it think,
Of bad times, not the good.
I’m at the edge; I’m on the brink,
My mind not understood.

Open your heart let me in,
I’m banging on the door.
Will my love be allowed to win?
I can’t take any more.

M.H.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Omg... I totally love your poem because it soo ... unexplainable.. the good sentence fluency, the good choices of words....the mood.. the settings... amazing....you are a good writer... and I hope you really know that deep down in your heart, and you will keep on writing... keep it up with the amzing job you have done!

  • 18 years ago

    by ambika

    you write some really powerfull stuff. i can relate to many of your poems. keep writing.

    ambika

  • 19 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    personal experiances mainly. if im upset i find it easier to write it down than explain my feelings in words.

  • 19 years ago

    by In_Your_Eyes

    This is really good, I can really relate. What are your inspirations for writing poetry?

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