beautiful poem!! the way you have written it is just lovely and passionate.

hey GREAT POEMS...your a real good writer and i can really relate to a lot of these poems...and thanks for commenting on my poems...feel free to comment anytime...and im addin you to my favorites list....
and one for thing...just remember...
Cuando amor no es locura, no es amor
it means...
when love is not madness it is not love!

*Kharisma*

brilliant poem ! u wrote it so well. well done

hey that was by far the best poem yet i have read i really liked it i relate to alot of them my first love picked me up off my feet and then dropped me in my own tears that i had cried for him and i was lost with out him then i relized i didn't need him anymore it was just holding back from what i could really do and i just think that u are a really good writer and u need to keep it up LOVED IT

Wow I want to print this and give it to dude I'm breaking up with. It was everything I had to say but couldn't. Awesome.....5......

wow this was a good poem i really liked

Good for you, this is the best one yet!

NICE!!!

FiRME POEM

You know, i think i really like this a lot!

Awwwwww... datz cute.. ii love it...