Comments : SaD LOSt GuRL

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Awww...the world is just one giant heartbreak eh?...Take care hun, Lovely poem, it flowed well and the words and rhymes were perfect <3, great job xx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 18 years ago

    by miracle

    lately all i can do is cry and i really like this poem cause i can recgonise some things in it
    i've comment on your other poem too, wich was really good either
    you're really talented please read some of mine too
    5/5 for you!

    milou

  • 18 years ago

    by Nella Heartbreaker.

    Great poem. keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by kareeenuhhh

    Wow...i dont know what to say... that was amazing...=0

  • 18 years ago

    by lynn

    That was a f..kin good poem..sad,yea guys are fu..in stupid..n e way stay writeing and stay up..

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    The pain of love can be so traumatic.This is a very powerful piece emotion -wise, so sad with a touch of angst and futility in a tormented heart( although crys should be cries, a minor grammatical detail you may wish to change).The river of tears line is good and the last line has such an impact, 'forever and so long', a unique phrasing.So sad.Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    Deep and heartfelt. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Hope

    I really like this poem. It means so much to girls going throught their first heartbreak. It hurts so bad but it teaches you so much. Thanks for the comments. Never stop writting.
    Hope

  • 17 years ago

    by Ankit V Master

    Pain , and just more pain .As it is said darkness is more profound then light.Anyways good work.