Unspoken words

by Sad_Little_Kitty_Kat   Dec 3, 2004


I tried my best to give my
Love
When all the while it wasn't
Enough
I gave you my all,not knowing
My love was everything but
Pure
Too blind to realize
You were needing something
More
I was always in the distance
Whenever you needed a
Hand
Too far offshore to
Realize you were on
Land
I was proud to admit
what we had was
Gone
And too selfish to see
It was my loss
I though i tried everything
But there was something I
Was overlooking,
Three words i left
UNSPOKEN!

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  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Stacey,
    thanks for posting on my "WE ARE VERY LUCKY" tread. no it is definately not a bad thing that you write heaps, if it helps you it's great, though writing can be unhelpful for some. it seems like you enjoy it and if that is true keep it up! your poems are great too so theres no reason to stop. your mom will probably get used to it, my parents thought i was releasing too much information into the world when i started writing, but now they know i'm not gonna stop and its my choice! :)
    so keep writing girl
    peace and love,
    sammi morris xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Adam Murphy

    I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM!...ALOT..lol.. I suck at giving compliments but this was a great poem

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