Farewell to my father

Hi Ryan ..I am sorry for your loss...My step dad died Dec 20,2004...The love of my mothers life,when she cries we all do
I liked your poem
Happy New Year

Ryan,
i have been following you work for sometime on this site, and i must say that this is the best work yet. I am currently studying the Miesner Method of acting and the most prominant reacurring theme is " dont do until something makes you do it." In other words act only on inspiration. Although effected by a terrible loss, in your poem you have presented raw emotion which you have channeled through an inspiration, and thats what made it beautiful. This event brought a release, and you acted only by another force. Of course i am very sorry for your loss, but i can not say that i understand how you feel because i have never lost a loved like that, or known one of such a honorable notion, however, i feel like i have lost something too...keep it up

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aubrey

wow, that was really good. im so sorry about your father. I know what it feels lyke to loose someone u truly love, my brother. but u will always have support and there are always people who are there for you. keep writing. it was really really good.