wow, amazing poem. deff a 5. the words flow so well, brilliant!

stay strong, lu -x-x-x-

Wow, excellent job!

I really love how you set it up. It flows so well...Deffinite 5/5!

Great Job! [keep it up]

I do not fear the Reaper,
For my life has now been stolen. *geee u really know how to play w/ words! u blended it just so well. Keep makin sensible poems..

OMFG dat was briliant (im soz but i had to check on da internet wefa u copied it not SORY) but that was so goood the structer and everyfin deff keep it up its orsum , deff 5 , cya luv lidxxXxx

I loved it!! It flows very nicely and has a dark shadowy mood... great work!!

that is brilliant! and so original! true talent!

...that was beautiful. it almost brought a tear to my eye. amazing flow to the poem, by the way! you have amazing talent, keep up the good work!
PS: if you get a chance, check out some of my work. it would be greatly appreciated. thanks!
lots of love,
~Krystle~

wow, that was really amazing, i like how you set it up, I no longer, and For I am, it was nice, and i can really relate to those words

awesome! i give it a 5

Wow...Amazing..That was really beautiful. I envy your talent. Great job dear. Keep it up. So beautiful.

great poem

wow

An angry soul, or just alone, who shouts from across the void.... A summons to all those who would end their lives so blindly perhaps. Just the impression I got. I loved it.

beautiful, truly whole, and a wonderful poet and mind behind this poetry, you did an intracit job of portraying deep sorrow and feeling, i love this poem, nice job

This is an excellent poem..just beautiful!!!!!

Amazing poem!! I really enjoy reading all your stuff. This one really hit the heart. I especially loved the lines:

I no longer feel the cold,
For I am already frozen.

Keep up the great work! I wanna read more of your stuff..

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

I figured for the record I'd add that I would never dream of copying a poem, off the net or anywhere, in case it's brought up for future reference.

Hey, and I also really appreciate you guys commenting on my stuff. Thanks always,

paperdoll.

P.S Thanks to all but Tiffany. *Insert dramatic roll of eyes* Self-explanatory, I think.

wow ....that is definetly one of my favorite poems on this site. That was great ..you should check out some of my poems if you have the time. awesome job.